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Ciera and Abby

Ciera and Abby
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Monday, July 20, 2009

Once opon a time?

Today i was thinking about books, not just any books but fairy tales. So all fairy tales start with once upon a time right? but why? Do they absolutely have to? I mean I could right a fairy tale right now and it did`nt have to begin with once upon a time and end with they lived happily ever after. So that is exactly what I did. So here goes, hope you like it.

One cold and cloudy day a princess was walking along the beach, wearing her silk, purple gown. Thinking and looking at the sky. She thought it looked as if someone had painted it and because the princess could see the delicate streces of the sky. then the princess heard her name being called demi, demi. So the princess started toward the castle as demi walked back to the twinkly old castle the little creaters could hear Demi`s quiet foot steps. When princess demi got back to the castle her mother had some news that Demi `s little baby cosion was coming over. So demi went to bed and awakened to see some flowers at her door. with a note saying meet me at the bridge tonight. Demi was very curious, who was this person? what did he want? why did he send the flowers? That night her little cusin came and was asleep in demi`s bed. So Demi put a jacket on and snuck out to the riced bridge. When demi got to the bridge she saw a man dressed in a red coat. Demi could`nt make out his face. then the man grabbed demi and carried her to an underground hideout. In this small safe place the walls were coverd in paintings and drawings of Demi. then suddenly the cave went dark and light again butwhen it became bright again but the man was gone....

okay people before I finish the story five people have to comment on this post, so hurry up and comment.

5 comments:

MAMACITA said...

Woah girl!! O.K. here's comment #1!! Can I comment 4 more times to make up the 5 comments?? :D Really like this story so far!! How'd you come up with Demi for her name? You're just so dang creative!! I'm anxious to see what will happen next!!

Liz said...

Sorry Abby...I'm a little behind on checking blogs! You ARE so dang creative! Keep it coming!!!!

Trish said...

You are such a talented writer! I felt like I was reading a real story. It was very suspenseful and I really wanna know how it ends! Hurry!!! Two more comments needed!!!!

Mandy said...

Hey Abby Kay"e"! I am a little slow at checking blogs lately too it seems. I love your story so far and your short commentary right before about "once upon a time." You made me laugh. Please keep the story coming I want to know what happens next you published writer to be!

Liz said...

Does it count if I comment again????? I want to know how it ends!!!! We're all super excited to come see you guys tonight!