Sabrina Starr, in this book is an ordinary girl,smart and funny. But her dad is very strict so be careful with him. Sabrina never knew her mom, me neither so you have to come up with that. So have fun turning the pages, ( or scrolling down with your mouse)with all the fun adventures Sabrina Starr has. This is were the book starts. ONE chilly day Sabrina was walking down the street to return the book peter pan. On her way she herd a screech then a cry. Sabrina turned a corner and saw a man picking up a little girl and putting her in his car with a evil glance in his eye. then drove off.She had to do something but what? Maybe they went to the broken down building on center street. the girl decided that she could do this on her own, so she started on her mission. when Sabrina got there the door was locked ,but there was a low open window that she could climb through. so Sabrina Starr jumped put her foot over and climbed in. she did not feel comfortable nobody would in this place.it was just one big room all dusty and scary. Starr went into a room none was there so she tried the next one in there sure was the little girl she ha seen earlier. Sabrina started to unwrap her. suddenly alarms started ringing but that didn't stop Sabrina , she untied the rope and the girl ran ... to the man that had captured her this was all a movie she had done something truly what is called embarrassing. Latter Sabrina Starr our hero had to have a take with her dad about going out alone. Lets hope next time she saves someone it will be real.
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Ha-what a fun ending. You definitely put a twist in the story there at the end. Excellent Abby Kaye. Well, being the teacher that I am I challenge you to go back and edit your story and capitalize all the proper nouns and beginning of sentence capitalizations...I can grade you next time I log in ;). Then it will be perfect. You are so imaginative. P.S. You need to go see Avatar Abby-you would LOVE it. It made me think of you because you are so imaginative. I'm pretty sure you could've helped produce a movie like that. Love you!
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